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~Roses of Blue~

Never would you share with me your roses of blue…
The things I saw in your soul, felt stirring within my own.
May have been nothing more than my own reflection as it rest quietly on faith
If we were to dream together...
I wonder...

If our feet would find the same paths?
Or veer in opposite directions as they force me now to lay alone.


I thought I saw love in your eyes...
sure that I felt it in the softness of your touch.


Swearing I had heard it... just once!
In your husky tone, as you called to me..."Hey Lady"


The heart soars well above everything .
I believed in my soul to have ever known... the sure thing?


I wear my heart upon the sleeve.
So willingly I would be to give it to you...
If you were to just say the words, just once...


In life we are not made promises.
I would learn this from the echo’s of his voice


My resolve would come from the knowledge that we are sometimes only blessed with a little bit of compromise.

A whole lot of faith...
Only then do we find our own tiny bits of sublime...


You never offered me roses of blue...

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  • nansie
    May 4, 2008
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    Beautiful

    You are so creative, keep on writing
    Love Light and Peace
    Nansie


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      May 4, 2008
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      nansie~

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and for reading me....
      Many blessings
      ~A~


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    What a sad and beautiful write!!! Blue roses...never offered...SIGH!


    Az


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      April 9, 2008
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      Az

      sighs..no never...Sad for the ones who over look those roses of blue...smiles

      Hugs...
      ~A~


  • DayDreamMuse
    February 1, 2008

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    Sad and beautiful. It was very intense for me and well I felt really affected. Roses of blue. So interesting and mysterious.

  • icebear
    January 19, 2008
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    mmmmm

    Red Roses to you. 12 Dozen and a few. None of them blue. Nothing is sure. Not even "I love you"


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      January 20, 2008
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      icebear

      awe..thank you and you are so right...Nothing is sure...smiles
      Peace and many blessings
      ~A~


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    January 16, 2008
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    ~Robin~

    I think you are correct...this really was right up my alley...smiles..
    And yes I believe that it felt very much like your daughters blanket and teddy...
    Thank you for viewing me as a wild flower, tis a beautiful grassy hill to be placed upon...smiles
    I dont see you here that often anymore and have missed your work as well.
    Psss...someday my garden will be full...perhaps then I could write of that..
    Thank you so much for reading me and for your beautiful comment.
    So nice to see you again...
    Peace and many blessings
    ~A~


  • Robin Candor
    January 16, 2008

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    This piece is right down your alley. I have grown to know you and recognize your voice in print. This is not a bad thing. Jen will ask me, "How did you know that was the singer or band when I here a new song start that I have never heard before?" It is the tone, the 'feel' of the music. You write as a wild flower that is growing alone in a field that pleads for the sun or the rain with nothing other than the force of the elements to keep you alive and support your every breath. Whether it is personal or only poetry, I still see that wild flower upon a hill somewhere, hoping, waiting, for that special something. Wind, rain, storms, floods, or drought, I recognize you. You are becoming familiar to me like an old friend when I see your ink spilled. I do not know you, only your words. But your way is specific to you and it is grand. As with all of us we read each other and wish we could write like that. It's funny that even though I'm not here alot, I read you and it is like my daughter who has her special blanket, Super Sally, and Teddy. They make her feel at home because they are familiar to her experience. When I pop in here and read your work, I have that same feeling. You are a writer I am comforted by. I just know you, 'wild flower'. RC


  • sunny day
    January 13, 2008

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    Asdzza, Congratulations on the Honorable Mention you received here. So often in life people will say those three words and not in the context that they should be said. When we give those words they should be from our heart and meant with our entire being. You painted a picture with your words that emulated the prompt very well. I do have faith though and I know my soul mate feels the same no matter what happens in our lives. Thank you for sharing with all of us. Love and God bless, Joyce


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      January 13, 2008

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      Sunny Day.....

      Thank you so very much for this beautiful comment...smiles...
      Doing this one was very easy for me..,
      And you are so correct..saying those three little words is often done much too lightly...it isnt enough to simply say them..but to live and breathe each moment of that love..smiles
      Peace and many blessings
      ~A~


  • m2lost24get
    January 12, 2008

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    well done so often the love we feel for another isnt noticed for they feel it is just shared words in friendship and words of commented banter. they dont see that one had true expressed feelings and in my case I had thought they had also meant it when they said the 3 specail words but he only meant them in a different context than my own heart realized. just the meer sound of the voice or their essense turns our minds and souls into complete awareness of just them. thank you for entering and many blessings always xx


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      January 12, 2008
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      m2lost24get

      Thank you so much for your comment...
      I've never been really great at giving of faith...to anything most importantly love...
      I understand this place that you come from...
      Sometimes people say one thing and mean another, I dont think they are honest with themselves and are unaware of who they really are...
      Im sorry that you were hurt....
      I wish only wonderful things for you...
      Peace and many blessings
      ~A~


  • Sara Bellem
    January 11, 2008

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    Oh wow... I think a lot of people can relate to this, I know I sure can on more than one occasion ... unrequitted love is such a hard thing to deal with, especially when the other doesn't care or doesn't have a clue!

    No worries, you will find the man of your dreams beautiful You're too great of a person not to!!!


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      January 11, 2008
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      Happy...smiles

      Thanks so much for this wonderful comment...
      So nice to see you again...smiles
      Peace and many blessings..
      ~A~


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    January 10, 2008
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    Andy...

    Thank you so much..smiles
    Wonderful to see you again..
    Peace and many blessings
    ~A~


  • LifeTourist
    January 10, 2008
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    a passionate write ,poet...one more notch on your flowing pen...andy


  • Arizona Sunset
    January 10, 2008

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    this is such a tender and loving write that it can't help but mist my eyes. I totally understand the heart you put into this. I know you would gladly give of your heart and vice versa, but love has a language all of its own where sometime although unspoken you know even without those roses where the heart lies...beautiful, and elegant...and loving...just WOW! thank you for sharing this poem. Best to you in the contest! ~blessings always~ Trisha~


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      January 10, 2008
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      Trisha

      Smiles... Thank you my lovely for this beautiful comment...
      Blessings to you in return...
      ~A~

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