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Can the heart

Love is suppose to mean everything
but what happens when you dont feel anything
does this mean my love is broken
or just my heart
I tell myself I have moved on to better things
but than I still find myself trying to find his qualities in them
when I tell them I just cant do it really it is not because of them
but because of him
he's got my life so wrapped around his finger
I am slowly suffocating but it hurts to much to just turn away
everybody says " you can do so much better you need someone to treat you like the princess you are"
But their words are like a fly that I nochalantly wave away

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  • DrkPoet silver member
    March 1, 2008
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    Very nicely done, or just started as I see in your author notes. How true your words are about trying to find someone else and comparing them to the one that you wish you were or could be with, I've been in that situation and it's painful. Thanks for sharing and entering my contest