We take so much for granted.
We don’t notice how much that we take for granted.
We talk about how our parents treat us unfairly, and they are all in our business.
Think about the children who don’t have parents at all!
Then there is the thing about not being able to go out with your friends.
At least you have friends, some people don’t have friends cause nobody likes them.
Talk about how school is so hard to deal with. And you don’t do the best in school to get an education.
But just think about those children who would die to go to a school like you are. BUT they can’t cause they don’t have the money or anything to do things.
You think your house is to small to live in or to crowded.
You have a home some people don’t.
Be thankful that you have a mom and a dad.
Children all over the world have lost their mom and dad to AIDS and so much more things than that.People wish they have what you had.
Be happy that you don’t have to go to war at your age, 13, 14, 15, 16 s
Some children do.
All the things that we have right in front of us houses, cars, food , a place to sleep and so much more.
Not everyone has that. So why do we do we take it for granted.
We need to appreciate everything that we have cause not everyone is as provided with things like you are.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Great Great Great! I really really liked this one alot! I think it makes us think about what we do granted..I know i do all the time.
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Nice write it was very thoughtfull about the world and other people... my favorite part was:
Then there is the thing about not being able to go out with your friends.
At least you have friends, some people don’t have friends cause nobody likes them.
Thank you for entering the contest. good luc -
great write again you have a wonderful talent. keep up the good work.
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this was really good.i liked the emotion!
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