Is this how it's supposed to be?
My knees buckle, my breath catches,
You say that you're in love with me.
Your arms around my waist,
My heart with in your hands,
As you gently touch my face.
There is another in your life,
Much to my dismay.
The mother of your children, your wife.
Here I ponder, when I know the truth,
As I wait for things to change.
Am I a home wrecker lacking couth?
And so I know my love is true,
My heart and soul (I wish I could show)
Burn continuously for you.
A contest entry
- Unusual Love by Blue Eyed and Alive.
415 points, ended January 29, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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awwww wow, how sad and beautiful , lovely write, good lick in the contests =)
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this is a really good poem and i enjoyed reading it thank you for entering in my contes
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I also enjoyed this piece! another wonderful write!
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I really like this. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck to you.
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thank you for sharing your poem, I like the how every word fits so well together.
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its nice...real nice!
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