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Rain

It lightly
splattered against the bright yellow side
of my little brothers TONKA truck

he watched from the screened window
smiling
because he knew that soon
There'd be a Rainbow

A contest entry

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  • Sunshine Princess
    January 10, 2008
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    thank you for your nice poem
    love Genna

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    This is cute she will like this little poem thank you for sharing and goodluck in her contest best wishes and much love