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Dont You See

Days in the winter time are long; the snowflakes just keep falling,
The light fades away quicker then when it comes,
Nothing is right,
When your stading in the snow alone.

She told him how she felt,
She told him.
It was the most painfull thing that she had ever experienced.
Through all the guys she's met and dated,
He seems right,
For the first time in her life.

He is someone,
Like no other,
Through all of his changes,
Her feelings for him havent.

The crying she did after she told him,
Was unbearable,
The thought of him not feeling the same hurt her even more.

She's only liked him,
The guys she dated were a fling,
Nothing more.

She wants him,
She needs to be with him.

So she waits out in the snow for him.
Snow is the meaning of new beginings,
And she wants to begin with him.

The snow isnt stopping,
Either are her feelings,
So just let the snow fall,
Becuase she's going to wait,
Till they both can be together in the snow.

With all my love.
Hailey

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  • m2lost24get
    January 12, 2008
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    well done as the visions of winter and snowflakes always have such a romantic feel to them when you are standing out under the falling gentleness. I know it's hard to waiting and wanting through laughter and tears but we get stronger with each moment in time. many blessings always xx