My strings were torn
From the stitches on my heart
The darkness is born
When you decided to depart
You're gone
And so is all of my light
There's one more dawn
You fade from my sight
You became one with the darkness
A single entity
You became one with my hatred
There's nothing left of me
Excpt for hate
The dark
The pain
It glows
Like a flame
It grows
And hatred is its name
like it?
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love it!!!! it is really dark
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thanks
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sure...it is really good.
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gr8 babe, i love the metaphor!! -
amazing, i love the rhythm and flow of it, and it holds so much meaning, i really liked it.
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Wow, can we feel it?
Very well done indeed.
Loved the flow and the images, and the style.
The emotion of the piece rich and colorful.
Thank you for translating your feelings to words.
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