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6 weeks 3 days

I got to see it
it is so cut
like a little tad pole
swimming in my tummy
and its little heart goes
buhbumpbuhbump

The smile on my face
still hasnt gone down
I am so happy

Everything is okay
we are both fine...

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  • The smile on my face
    still hasnt gone down
    I am so happy

    a good smiling piece of poetry which you have written and shared with us here.

  • Page Deleted
    February 28, 2008

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    second line cut should be cute



    but besides that
    great write it really made me think and feel


  • imagine732
    January 23, 2008

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    this is sweet.....The smile on my face
    still hasnt gone down
    I am so happy...thats my fave part..........just a little hint..the second line says that your baby is CUT...i am pretty sure you ment CUTE........lol...it is still really really good


  • Charity Ann
    January 23, 2008
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    Congratuations. Hopefully everything will be well for you and your family!

  • angelelectra
    January 23, 2008

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    beautiful

    a beautiful little poem which clearly determine the happiness brought to you by this pregnancy. Congratulations and keep up the great work!


  • Metaphorist
    January 23, 2008
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    Congratulations! Thar's wonderful. Wishing you the best of luck in your pregnancy.

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