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Love Is

A million dancing feet
and I am the floor
Losing myself in the beat
ignoring the bruises

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  • DiamondsStartAsCoal
    October 8
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    Only too true

  • funeral rose
    January 15, 2008
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    Wonderful. I feel ya.


  • Boris Plotz gold member
    January 13, 2008
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    noyce.


  • Whitefaeryofdeath
    January 12, 2008
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    Short and sweet. Rather depressing but in a way that seems happy.


  • Diamondin the rough
    January 10, 2008
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    Amen!

    Preach my brother, preach!

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