Ducking out of the rain
I looked up and said
You missed
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A contest entry
- New Pixiku and Trophyless Prewrites by SEA angel.
360 points, ended January 22, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let Nature Speak by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended February 7, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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cute trying to duck rain drops, but to suceed it much more worth the effort...thank you for this entry, good luck
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This is hysterical! Thank you so much for the smile.
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how we add dodge the rains of life eh? This is a nicely done piece. It can be interpreted quite freely, I like that alot. I would not alter it.
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Haha very nice. Great title too. I don't really know what else to say! Good luck in the contest and take care
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This made me smile
Thank you. That's a fun way to look at that nice feeling when we make it inside just in time. Sort of like God was waiting for the coast to be clear for us. I love those days where everything clicks with perfect timing.
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