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pain

"Don't Bite the hand that"
takes your's and makes you feel safe
Don't bit the hand that
Caresses your skin in sweet embrace

You can hurt the ones you love without even meaning to.

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  • daviscth silver member
    January 10, 2008
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    I like this different take on my prompt. Thanks for posting.


  • xblakxrosexremainsx
    January 10, 2008

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    this words are so wise. and so true. despite the shortness. this little piece makes you think alot! amazing