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This Door Will Remain Closed To You



Too many mistakes
lay spread
wide on my horizon
and you
as spectating participant
know all.
Prejudice wears a mask
yet I can see clear
the judgements
made in your eyes.


Author notes

Prompt: I love you, but I'll be damned if I let you know it!!!!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
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Comments


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 11, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper