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Infinite

Infinite yet sure

stands still for no-one

each moment comes to pass

as another arrives...


It cannot be brought back

nor be pushed forward

confined to be as is

everlastingly so...


Subsequent days follow

yesterday remains gone

there is only now

this moment in time~

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  • Kathryn Bowden
    January 29, 2008
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    so true!

    very nice write, I enjoyed it.


  • Frozentearz
    January 20, 2008

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    Congrats on the H.M.
    phew this gives us a lot to think and ponder over.
    and I love the fact it was free-verse. your words flowed with ease leaving me with once again something
    to think about..
    Tearz feeling this moment in time
    Love ya


    • Frogzter gold member
      January 20, 2008
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      Thanks sis, I am slowly but surely trying my hand at free verse... it still remains a difficult chore, but one I am tryng to conquer! Huggles,

      Frogz~


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    January 11, 2008
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    Excellent piece, loved the description imagry and word play. Hugs, Bunny

  • goalsv
    January 11, 2008

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    Great job, this is written well, and really brings out that we can only live in the now. We must not live in the past or for the future.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    An excellent write. A wonderful way to look at the meaning of time. Clever word play. Very good flow and tone. Very good word choice. Good alliteration and nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest dear one. Mom


    • Frogzter gold member
      January 10, 2008
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      Thanks mom! I am really horrible at free verse, but am trying to broaden my horizons a bit! Much love! Hugz~

      • ShelleyA gold member
        January 10, 2008
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        Free verse is a challenge for me as well. I think you did a great job with this piece. I love it! Love to you and

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