Childish play, innocent gaze;
Disguised gestures, concealed notions.
Seeking a moment,
to delight in
my cruel intent.
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A contest entry
- Decisions Decisions.... by Dalaney.
575 points, ended January 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i can't tell you enough how much I love this!
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Wow... haha not much more I can say
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Rock on!
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Wow....what a write!! Simple usage of words with a deafening meaning...
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wow, that was amazing, it was short and sweet and said just enough... good job!
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shiver...wow.
lane
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I love this - excellent write
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Alright. This one is gonna haunt my day, today. I needed toread it twice before commenting. Your choice of words speaks (reads) volumes...and the ending leaves a truly delightful, wicked little grin
. Best of luck to you!
Enough said,
Peace,
Jin
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