He’s the voice I hear in the morning, when I open up my eyes.
He’s my ray of sunshine, breaking through my dark demise.
He’s the reason I get up, when all I want is sleep.
My release from it all, when the pool of drama gets to deep.
He’s the laughter throughout my day, keeping a smile on my face.
He’s the song that’s always playing; He’s my happy place.
He’s the calming hand on mine, when I think I lost it all.
He’s the beautiful smile in my day, never letting me fall.
He’s my other half, the reason I feel whole.
He’s the bounce in my step, the excitement in my stroll.
He’s the kiss on my cheek, when I lay in bed and cry.
He’s the reason now, that I never want to die.
He’s the missing piece, in my lifes puzzle.
He’s the one that I hold, when all I want is to cuddle.
He’s the air that I breathe, throughout my stressful day.
The light when I cant see, when My life has gone astray.
He’s the reason why; this life is worth it all.
When I’m feeling immature, He’s my baby doll.
He’s the keeper of my heart, the reason my soul sings.
He’s my son, he’s my baby, he’s my everything...
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Option # 2
I worked pretty hard on this one.. Hope you like it
My-Insanity
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Wow, this is so beautiful and sweet. Your son is very lucky to have a mom like you. I can feel how much you love him with all your precious and wonderful words. Great write.
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It was a touching poem! Though you had a few grammatical errors, but that can be easily fixed.
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ohhhh my goood nessss this is sooo sweat I love it the rythem I loved how you tied it together so nicely the flow was perfect I wish I could write like this !!! thanks for entering this is an awsomely amazing piece so nice!!!!
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This was very beautiful and the flow was great! Love is an amazing feeling isn't it? Good luck in the contest dear.
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dang. dang. The flow and fluidity of the rhyming is awesome. It all makes sense. Well, good luck in the contest! Good job!
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WOW!!!!!
This is amazing!!! I love it! And I'm proud to be the first to comment! You better win!! You have to!! <333
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Thank you
Thank you very much, that was a very encourageing coment and i appreciate it very much so..honestly what can I say. I really love my baby boy
... anyway thank you very very much. sometime soon i will come back and see your page. as for now.. Imma get some sleep.. lol thank you. L@ter
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