Gravity pulls under, sheets for the unimagined ghouls
Cobwebs go untouched by memories entombed
The emerald crystal shimmers like the cats eye
Prepared potions set aside by the brewing offal
The bottles here labelled lizards eye's, ogres toe,
Caterpillar tongue, bettle blood, monkey fur
All bubly from boiling and sparkly with dusts
The ingredients whole with spells unbroken
Obviating cloudless glows of failure
Caustic spells turn the sapphire night ablaze
Purge this secret darkness into thy punctured veins
Intricate magic charms craft insipid savories
Occult forces coming to life one by one
atone with natures serenity
Empowered with so much scourging truth
Full grown intone, enveloped in a magic wand
Renowed for spending life and love within a circle of light
Escapades have been collected by this wrenched old broom
Time has now come... to set forth to the moon
Pale purple kisses surge into the blood stream, till then... I go unseen.
Author notes
fantasy about magic, or witchcraft...
A contest entry
- Fantasy!! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended January 20, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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One word.......... BEAUTIFUL!!!
Wickedly awesome composition fellow poet! I bloody love the concept of this poem to death...yes,magic!! The atmsophere created with this piece is stunningly lovely, the old-style folklore kind of feel to it is the greatest, honestly this is truly magnificant.
Love it...love it...love it!! Oh and congrats on the trophy
~Emily~ xx
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While this was very well written I think it could of used some spell check for I noticed a few misspelled words. Other then that it was really very well done. I could get into the imagery and the flow was well done as well. Keep penning and you will go far. Thank you for sharing this with us
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Very nice!
Witchy, Mystical and above all MAGICAL and fantasical!
Excellent job.. well done.
I really enjoyed reading this,
congrats on the honourable mention.
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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Excellent
A very fine free verse. I like the imagery you have created in this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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thank you Clovis6790Curious!
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You are welcome.
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I an speachless. This poem has such a great flow to it. I absolutely love the last line, it really ended the poem nicely. And line three, what a great use of simile! This poem was absolutely marvolous. The title was so random, but it seemed to work perfectly with the poem. And line 9! "Obviating cloudless glows of failure" I don't know what to think of it!! It's so beautiful...all in all, I love this poem, it's amazing.
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I imagined magic to have that purple tint... thus amerhyst. Thank you so much beautfullyxbroken for you very kind words and for being truly honest with it. I really appreciated your comment very much.
Thanks once again.
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This is pretty good. I like it alot. keep up your good work. best of luck
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thanks...
I did try to write it all up.
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