of passion... pulsed
through ...your lilied fingers
Weaving wicks for friends your living
candles
A flame
of passion... pulsed
through ...your lilied fingers
Weaving wicks for friends your living
candles
of passion... pulsed
through ...your lilied fingers
Weaving wicks for friends your living
candles
Author notes
Traditional Cinquain.
THE TRADITIONAL CINQUAIN, as developed by Adelaide Crapsey, is a short, unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed in five lines and arranged accordingly:
Line 1 - 2 syllables
Line 2 - 4 syllables
Line 3 - 6 syllables
Line 4 - 8 syllables
Line 2 - 2 syllables
Dedicated to Nicolette...
Picture Artist: Georgia O'Keeffe.
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A contest entry
- chanson: songs of love and wine by Nicolette.
900 points, ended January 20, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Ain't All Bad; Right? by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended April 28, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on the trophy - it's a wonderful cinquain, Nicky (like i've said earlier)!
~ Nicolette
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A very nice dedication for the person named...yielding a very well written poem. Thanks for your entry
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Just reading this lovely cinquain again, Nicky! I like the way you've applied pauses and line breaks here, as well as the individual statement each line makes - well done!! A fine, fine entry!
Thank you for this beautiful poem.
~ Nicolette
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First, I have to comment on the gorgeous picture
of the lily, which enhanced your poem to perfection. It is like your choice of words painted this pic.
I loved reading this one! beautiful! -
Wonderful way with words, liked the creative us of space, colors and lovely image that adorns this write. Great presentation.
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This is a lovely penning for an even lovelier person. Well done, Poet. Good luck in Nic's contest. Wanda
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this is a breathtaker... Very nice.
truely enjoyed. Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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Wow... this is a beautiful cinquain, Nicky and this glass of fine wine comes with a birthday wish for me as well
Thank you, my friend for this gesture - I appreciate it so much and it's wonderful to wake up to something as lovely and thoughtful as this...and it's a perfect cinquain too. I see you've weaved many aspects that are dear to me into your words. Thank you, my friend!!
~ Nicolette
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aw..this is so beautiful!! A very lovely cinquain here for Nic's birthday..so true this poem is!
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