She has something in her,
consuming her every thought.
Clouding her memory of the past,
making her forget her loves.
She screams out every night,
for someone to save her.
A contest entry
- Her Darkness by B.bdawn.
375 points, ended January 10, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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hmmm...
I really like this so much with not a lot of words!!! good job!!! -
OOOOOhhh Nice.
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Good take on the prompt, i was expecting to have many enteries like this one, but so far yours is the only one. Perhaps the fourth line... maker her foget about love? well written however, thanks for taking the time to enter.
Best of luck in all your writing
hddninshdws
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