screaming, begging them to stop why the gods stare at us by putting us on a planet. Laughing, mocking all of the things on earth. We all know it but all i do when i wake is scream.
Scream of knowing the truth when i want to sleep off my fate and never wake anylonger. Then im here , Im living the pain trying to endure as i live as the day ends. I die as i cry my tears of blood, hoping my end is near. I lie in my bed sleeping... dreaming, clawing myself as i sleep, my soul wanting to be free, to see that light once it came. but it never comes... I wake covered in scratches bleeding so so slowly. Then i relize that we are own creater. Then my final drop of blood falling from my hand to my finger and drops down. Then i lie in my bed knowing my screaming will end.
A contest entry
- Chaotic Poetry by Melodies.
600 points, ended January 11, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I by N e a r.
2300 points, ended February 3, 2008, 220 entries
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Comments
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Intense writing. The way you expressed yourself through screaming and the sleeping portion of the poem is capturing.
Line breaks and a background would enhance performance.
Thanks for entering your write at A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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Ah... very deep and intense, most truly!
I am so impressed by this poem/story... made me really appreciate your talent. The imagery here is so fine! A poem that makes the reader think and admire. WOW! 
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good work,
your poems are very intense,
hope you keep writing,
lots of us here to help, just ask if you need.
Be well and blessed be
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