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To Toy.

These few words say what I want you to know,
that on the day you show how you love me so,
when dependence or money play not one part,
will be the day that you alone will own my heart.

For that is when true love blooms its’ very best,
when life and deeds together have passed every test
and when Love is the feeling which rules your life,
proving without all doubt, you are my loving wife.

For together in pain or loving times in future years,
as we stroll down the path of life in laughter or tears,
our destiny will unfold the way it was written at birth,
and the final verse added when I depart this earth.

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  • Gwenevere
    January 26, 2008

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    Hiya Bazza.What a great little poem.I haven't read yours for a while, naughty girl.you keep 'em coming.They are GREAT!!!!!!!, , Ros

  • ashjoe76
    January 12, 2008

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    Son honest and sincere. One could only hope that the meaning of these words reach the heart one seeks. But I am optimistic that one's sincerity in love gets rewarded eventually.