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Button Up Its Chilly Outside

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*~* Button Up Its Chilly Outside *~*

 

 

 

Inert…
A nimbus moon casts her silhouette, upon a frozen pond.
She illuminates the twinkles of an unbendable shirt,
dangling, forgotten, a spectre fashioned by winter’s wand,
touched by a low melodious echoe of her striking refrain.
Why can’t the beauty of winter forever remain?

 

 

Soundless…
exploded breath dances upward in the foggy air,
amid rhythmic movement of swirls to impress.
Trees pose as parades of dancing ladies, I do declare,
for this is the Queen of season’s, breathtaking domain.
Why can’t the beauty of winter forever remain?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

-LilacThOughts-

Poetry Form: 'Wordflair' a creation of -LilacThOughts-

Background by nighty - Deviant Art http://nighty.deviantart.com/art/Winter-Serenade-26014075

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  • Eusebius
    November 20
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    Oh, most charming and fully able to conjure up winter visions to the very fullest! Wonderful word choice here and the perfect match for the background as well! Loved it!!


  • FifthDove
    January 24, 2008

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    A very wonderful poem, I enjoyed taking the voyage through your words. Best of luck to you in the contest also


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 23, 2008

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    This poem, a metaphor for winter, is lovely. The form you created is interesting, but doesn't look too danting, though I may be missing something.

    The Deviantart background works so well with the poem.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 22, 2008
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    great poem i love your page to i just got carreid away with the stanza


  • maralisa silver member
    January 21, 2008
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    lovely poem


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 18, 2008
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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 14, 2008
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    need to write this very soon


  • Lauren Noir
    January 14, 2008

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    This is so beautiful!

    I love the musical staves, that's so beautiful

    YOu're a talented lady, my beautiful mother

    I hope you have been having a fantastic winter and lets hope the new year is fabulous as January rolls on by



  • wakingdevil
    January 10, 2008

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    The background is as descriptive as your poetry is in itself...multifaceted, unique and alws creative.It's got a rugged yet beautifully serene touch to it which enhances its beauty...just curious how u mk bg's tho lol.Best of luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    January 10, 2008

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    Sis,

    I love this background! WOW!!!!!!! It is truly amazing!! I love the talent you show with these backgrounds! They are amazing!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • FifthDove
    January 10, 2008

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    Gorgeous

    OOOooo, this is wonderful, Oh just beautiful, you have a tellent and style that is just incredible I wish you the best in the compitition


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9, 2008
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    wow, love what you have done with the bg


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9, 2008
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    no, it has to stay wintry, it's winter!


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9, 2008
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