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Close your eyes,
gentle breeze,
waves licking your bare toes.
Home.
Sand sifts beneath your heels,
warm and welcoming-
-tears-
Taste the salt.
This is my island
look around,
these are my people-
mi gente.
My name is born within these seas,
and tossed upon these shores.

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  • SilverInk
    January 23, 2008
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    thanks for the comments guys, i get homesick sometimes


  • Grateful
    January 23, 2008

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    beautiful poem...starting lines are very soothing...ending lines are also wonderful..i really enjoyed your poem...thank you so much for sharing...


  • Polaja Greeters member
    January 12, 2008

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    This is beautiful ... The last two lines are pure magic... I can't really say much else... apart from that this piece renders me speechless

    Keep writing

    Polly