Those icy blues,
Your upbeat hues.
Your body language
sends a sign.
You have yours,
But i'll get mine.
You Turned me loose,
But i'm back again.
How can just one look,
provoke such sin?
I leave again,
and we reconnect.
Those Icy Blues, and their effect.
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no-way-ap
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make any sense?
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A good poem. I enjoyed the flow of it well done.
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It sort of makes sense
Is this a return of a love? A lust? A want? I don't know the story so i'm unsure!!! XD But yeah, I do like it and at least it looked too short for me but i actually think it's the perfect length. Nice job, Aubri 
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no clue.
I honestly Don't know what i wanted from this poem. I guess it's more along the lines of relationship in which one person is distant, whereas the other person tries.
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