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Whore

String me and play, boy
High above this audience
Make me dance my grotesque ballet
Show begins as crowd goes wild
I exit with a lead paint smile

Baby sing to me
Songs of one in ecstacy
Can't stand to feel this vibration
Can't stand to see your exhilaration

Hang me high and make me twirl
Live on sex, your life's breath
Breaking a union as beauty turns fowl
Take another piece of me with each disgusting howl

Baby sing to me
Songs of one in ecstacy
Can't stand to feel this vibration
Can't stand to see your exhilaration

Sweetheart one last kiss
With lips laced with poison
The curtains are closing
This dancer's done

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    January 15, 2008

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    i really liked 'lead paint smile' that phrase is inspiring in itself
    thank you for entering and best of luck