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You are gone

The red is still streaming down
Because you never come around
I sit and wait
For one special date
That I may be able to see you
Until then I remain blue
I wish you would come
Because I am glum
Even though I know you are gone

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well you don't have me as a fav so i wanted to enter.

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  • omg-its-sara
    January 22, 2008
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    This is a really sad, but very good poem. Good luck in the contest!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 22, 2008
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    Aww this is sad, I know how you feel... Short but very relatable.


  • Dak
    January 9, 2008
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    hehe, I like your rhyming and word choice
    another good poem