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My Gift

It isnt long, but always hard
Its not money or a card
Its fragile and can make me cry
When its neglected it makes me cry
But when its caressed and loved a lot
I show appreciation with my gift, my tater tot

Author notes

This is just a funny poem I wrote in response to another poem written by my best friend, hers was all sappy and mushy about her heart so I "fun'd" it up a little and gave it my own little twist lol you like?

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    January 15, 2008
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    Lol...wow....*giggles*


  • Nicotine Eyes
    January 9, 2008
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    This was funny and cite. Nice simpleism.(made that word up)

    [♥]Nicotine.


    • ImJay
      January 10, 2008
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      thanks for reading and commenting...I really appreciate it! Hope you had a good laugh


  • JustBeingDevine
    January 9, 2008

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    DORK!

    I can't believe you are making fun of my poem....lol I have to admit that I laughed my butt off when I read it....you are to funny...thanks for always keeping me smiling.

    Love ya!
    Jenn

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