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jejune pleasure

Unfamiliar ceilings
Wakefulness striking way too soon
Stealing blankets from the other side
Shivering from a chilled heart
And a cold room

Author notes

i love using vocab words for my titles,
lately my poetry has little to do with the actual content of my life, just things i'm thinking about and stuff
hmmm
Written November 9th, 2003

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  • January 11, 2004
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    Interesting, if slight poem. I liked the terseness of the piece,and feel it would benefit from being extended.


  • sad
    November 11, 2003
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    nice write ......thanx for the new word too..lol i looked it up as soon as i saw the title so i would know what it mean lol.....good work .


    ~SLY~