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As I Lay Dieing

as i lay dieing,
on this winter ground,
no one is waiting for me,
and then you i found.

i see your face,
you give me peace and grace,
in this gloomy place,
such a horrible case.

you give me strength,
and even thoughyou don't have to,
you get me through this,
now you give me love too.

now i'm fine,
and you're still hear,
it's nice to know,
you're always near.

you're still here now,
and i know you can see,
and it's nice to know,
you still love me!!

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  • Amazon Huntress
    April 22, 2008

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    Very sweet, uplifting poem but unfortunately I don't think it directly relates to the contest. Sorry!
    *~Huntress~*


  • onapedestalIstand
    April 22, 2008
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    this is about any religious being in your life...this is for the contest creator...thanks


  • ButterflyforChrist
    February 3, 2008
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    Awww, this is very sweet. Are you talking about God? I believe you are... and if so... I would give you a suggestion... To capitalize and name or pronoun you use to address Him with. I feel that it shows respect. This is very nice, and true. God never leaves us, He's always near and constantly loving us.

    Good job. Nice rhyme as well.