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exponential.

You sigh and I shake
I am a grand pessimist
Don't do that to me.

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This is about my dad. He has this habit of sighing a lot and since I'm such a pessimist, I assume it's my fault and something is wrong.

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  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008

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    Creative

    For this to be a haiku, no one would think that it is since you are coming from a more personal point of view. But nevertheless, always keep penning and good luck


  • NotOfThisWorld
    January 10, 2008

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    I freaking loved this. I know what you mean here, totally. =] You win: a Mini Cooper, a donut, an orange table and chairs, two glasses of milk, a peanut butter cookie, a yellow and green bra, and a piece of linoleum. LOL


  • jbbrandi
    January 9, 2008

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    Very nice. In just a few short words, the emotions and your meaning came through very clearly. Great job!