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Cherish (Do it like it's your last)

Touch me
Like it'll be your last and I'll be gone tommorrow.
Feel my soft chocolated skin under your fingertips, as if your touch would be
the last thing I feel.
Feel the warmth of my body as my body heat flares under your palms and caresses your hands, now embrace me...
Hold me as if I'm the tree and you're the roots
strengthed by the river
Hold me firmly, so that not even the strongest force on earth
can knock us from our foundation.
Hold me as if I'd be gone tommorrow and all that'll be left is
the apparition of my memory... now Kiss me.
Kiss me like you'll never see me again
Kiss me softly, tenderly as your lushious lips press against mine
and your tongue glazes them one by one... Bite... and pull softly
and suck gently... taste my kiss...
and I'll taste yours.
Do it like it's your last!
Trust me, now that I'm in your arms.
My heart is at your expense
and I shall protect your heart from emotional harm.
Trust me to never hurt you, trust me to stay and be here for you
and only you... Sex... can wait!!!
Now LOVE me... Love me more than you say you do.
Love me with your words, your voice, your kisses, and warming brace.
Love me with your heart, mind, body and soul.
Love me with hand made gifts, love me with your poetry, your smile
love me... like I'll be gone tommorrow... and Love your family the same...
Now CHERISH
    Cherish what we have, our love, me and my heart.
Cherish your family, your poetry, MY poetry.
Cherish my goods, my bads, and the moments that we spend together.
Cherish who I am, who you are, your beauty, and your body as well. Cherish LIFE!!!
Moral of this peice is....

Don't take anything for granted... like you already do

Author notes

For me and my current girlfriend. An for everyone else who needs to learn the value of their loved ones.

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  • Simplipoetic
    December 24, 2008
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    The bombae

    you know i know this song inside and out right?

  • Kataklistika
    February 13, 2008

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    Excellent

    Passionate and intense. This is a great poem. It would make me stop and think if I was someone who took my girl for granted.


  • IorganicInsight
    February 12, 2008

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    this is beautiful.
    i love the message.
    i just don't like how you emphasised some of the words using caps lock, but i've always had a pet peeve with that, so don't take it personal.

  • davidwright silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    These are powerful words. If only most relationships could forge such a bond, but then, what would lawyers do for a living. Good write neighbor. Happy trails


  • Number 13
    February 6, 2008
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    Awe ^^
    gorgeous write.


  • SOLS.Moonlight
    January 11, 2008

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    This was different, but cool. It reminds people to appreciate what they have now and don't waste time. I felt I could relate to this because I often don't stop to think about those I have. Great write.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    Excellent write indeed

    So often today sex is all they think about and thats why most couples never stay together .Yes love the soul the heart the mind and the companionship then the rest would be truly under rated for it only lasts a while where the rest lasts a lifetime . Bravo to you


  • Lady Purple
    January 9, 2008
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    nicely spoken. she'll love it. thumbs up!!

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