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Dampened sky

Do you see the sky?
Do you see the sky above the cool still water?
Imagine...
Imagine you're somewhere better.
Somewhere far from these moments that make you feel so small.


I'm falling towards a crescent moon above
I feel the dampness of heaven,and befriend this moment I have of clarity.
I'm  Hiding
Hiding in a blackened sky.
I'm scared so scared.

darkness awakens my soul and casts a shadow of contempt upon everything
Its all gone
Im alone
Alone with myself
My wrists are bleeding and I taste salt
my tear ducts erupt
Just a lonely synopsis
That's all I have.....

Love...
hope...
I whisper....



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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 19, 2008

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    This really touches me, I feel like that opening came right out of my head. Awesome write, and I love the ending lines. Thank you so much for sharing and entering the contest. Good luck.

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