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False Face

insubstantial wax 
cascading down  
my skull

i make it what  
i wish you to see

it is little more
than a game
i play,
one that
i have mastered
time and again 

i create false 
smiles  
and you buy them,  
false eyes   
that call you closer,  
false laughter, music  
that you fall into   

false eyebrows,  
false nose,  
false cheekbones  
 
in sleep they shall  
fade  
and be different  
tomorrow,  
all new at my  
discression
  
never see   
the real me   

years have passed  
without a face  
and it saddens me   
you never noticed 



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  • Emosie Vloei
    January 16, 2008

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    Never showing the real you while hiding behind many faces of deception.Being sad because they didn't notice the real you.But you never gave them the chance for you only showed the facade you created.Good write.


  • MissStranger
    January 10, 2008

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    no comment...this was amazing!my owrds are useless so I will applaud in absolute silence!bravo!thank you for entering and good luck!