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Lost Forever

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M'Lord m'love I dwell here alone
nevermore to roam free.
Across the great divide
I dare not approach the tides.
I know-est my eyes will feast not
upon thy handsome face again.
Fantasizing thy soft sweet kiss
alas thou shall know-est
what became of me.
Stormy nights, ship tossed
crew loss; I swam ashore.
Surviving on bottles of wine,
mango, coconut, fish
memories of how we dined.
Guess I be here M'Lord m'love
until the end of time.
In my sorrow
I still love thee;

Truly
Lady Novy

If found:

Please deliver to
Lord Mason (plantation owner)
4321 Kindston Bay
St. Thomas, Virgin Islands

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  • Tarja
    January 10, 2008
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    That is just gorgeous... I didn't particularly like the background but the poem was amazing! I am left wondering who is she... what is the story behind this... but not knowing makes it even more dramatic... love it. Thanks for entering and good luck.


    • ennovy silver member
      January 10, 2008
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      I to had problems with the backgroung so I changed it; I hope this one is better....


  • jcat gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    Oh how lovely!!!!! I love romances such as this!!! You wrote this so beautifully and the imagery was so perfectly melancholy.....