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Commemoration

My daring conviction
My last breath commenced
As you tore my heart
Right out of my chest

Though I don't hurt
From loss of lover
Because you were just
Just my brother

In these times
Of painful nights
Knowing you are dead tonight
I wish upon a star so bright

Marc, you're gone
Gone for good
All we have left to remember
Is your sweet, smiling face

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For Marcus.
R.I.P.
1/5/08

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  • AlyssaLies
    January 9, 2008

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    wah!thisis beautifulit made me cry timesare hell but his memory so sweet this was heart felt and beautiful