I built up a wall,
all mighty and tall,
with hopes that it never should fall.
This mighty wall leans on a grand pole,
which is doing its job, making them whole.
For the truth is, the wall couldn't stand,
without this pole's helping hand.
And the pole would be useless, strung on the ground,
If not for the wall hanging around.
Together they stand with all of their heart,
For if they do not they'll fall apart.
So know that all wrong can quickly mend.
You'll always stand steady, if you lean on a friend.
A contest entry
- Nursery Rhymes by Poetess12.
900 points, ended January 22, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Your lines,
"So know that all wrong can quickly mend
you'll always stand steady, if you lean on a friend,"
That's cute and true. I enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for your entry.
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excellent!
wonderfully written, great rhyme scheme , nice flow, and even better message.
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this is true and very sweet. GOD BLESS
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Thanks so much for commenting on my entry and I must say the moral of this is very cute!
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