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Sometimes

 


with the lack of proper care

wilting roses distrust…

 

And I look at you,

eyes behold a sadness

spreading across desire,

 

Seeping through the planks

of my vessel -

          

Must I fear the voyage?

 

To reevaluate the trade winds

I whisper words

where my hands

might navigate shores

that have become too distant.

 

Leaving fertile soil

for enemy seeds,

 

thus is the red sun

beautiful

yet ominous.

 

And as I look at you,

the girl who made sense

of ocean currents;

the siren

who set my sails on high;

the woman

standing on the bow

intent to face any storm:

 

The cabin below calls your name.

 

I have been the fool

And you - endured

my neglectful price.

 

Must I run this ship aground

to prove I kneel before you?

 

… the waters,

clear blue, warm and inviting

are unpredictable. 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 29

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    And yet again, such tender care placed within your words. I was moved to tears by this the first time, and again today. Truly a most moving verse.

  • Celticmoon silver member
    February 24

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    Ken,

    You always manage to capture emotion as a true poet should always. Touching, deep, and full of emotion in each line. Your words stand alone on a cliffside with the way you manage to express them as if shouting them out to the world and sending them sailing across the waves for all to hear.
    Thank you for entering.
    Best of luck to you!

    Blessings
    Bel

  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 10

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    Oh.... This was perfect what a wonderful poem.
    This applys to my life more than you could know.

    Brilliant, Thank you so much for this entry into my contest.


    more 's
    Delila


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 9
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    This made me cry. ~Pamela


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    January 9

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    It's true..lack of attention makes for sad state of affairs, really. Speaking from experience here. Apathy is dangerously contagious, even when it isn't intentional..

    I like the way you profess to be more than that here, it's very touching.



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