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There is no noise when I cry, since no one listens
There are no screams when I’m scared, since no one hears
There are no tears when I sob, since no one looks
There is no hope, since no one cares

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  • andie11
    January 11, 2008

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    i think people do care

    but if no body is hearing you, you need to listen to yourself, and be honset with yourself. sometimes the only person we all have in this word to rely on is ourselves. hope you get stronger and develop your self awareness and grow into a happier more confident person. teenage years are very confusing, i found writing poems helped me when i was younger, and to this day they are very therapeutic and reflect how i feel. so keep on writing and lets hope this helps you out when nobody is listening, by re-reading your work you may just find some answers, or relise "well that is how i felt then, this is how i feel now." i am sure you will notice how life never stays the same and things are always changing. good luck for your future happiness. xx


  • ZetaWolf Of Light
    January 10, 2008
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    This is a good poem... I pray that things get better.

  • Scott Chason
    January 9, 2008

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    It's probably not that nobody cares. It's probably more like: The people that you expect to care are too wrapped up in today's society of worries that they dont even recognise your problems as important since theirs are so much more "adult based" than yours, assuming we're talking about your parents. Next time you think that nobody cares about what you're crying about, think about what they could be hiding and worrying about themselves. Meet them on a mutual level. Adults dont often take much notice over the dramatic problems of fourteen year old girls, more often they laugh because they, as in time so will you, see them as minute.