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Holy desires





breath of mind, breath of god,
fire of love, spark of fire...

beat the heart of all those who like each other,
gondola of young lovers who dare
adventure of love, confidently happy,
driven the barge beyond hidden reefs,
towards quiet waves
from the ocean of love of god,
accompany, under immenseness of sky,
their brittle craft, often isolated in open sea,

sacred love, promises of protection, loyalty,
respect, an indivisible heart,
a holy love, never imagined
nocturnal guidance
warm wind blowing
in voices leaving emotions,
fountain of calm rays
in delicate simple way of
a love in an eternity.

you sparkle the holy desires.

 

 

 

 

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.Prompt: I've never thought of making love as being a holy thing, until ...Unknown

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    in delicate simple way of
    a love in an eternity.

    you sparkle the holy desires.


    yes, I can see the light and the sparkle of its warmness as well..wonderful work..


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 9, 2008

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    Hello, This was so beautiful. You wrote a wonderful poem for the quote. A nice quote too. I love the uplifting tone of your words!!! Great imagery my friend. Take care. Hugs and Smiles to you. God Bless you, Sandy