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Its all your fault

I will die fast
i will bleed slow
your words killed me when you said those words
i will never forgive you for the pain you created.
you left me sad so emo i went "MORE" and so i cut throught
the misery and i cut throught the painto escape from theis world   because theres no other way.

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  • Sticks-And-Stones
    February 22, 2008

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    I think in line three yur s of 'words' twice is a little reptitive and you could have probably left 1 of them off. But over all good poem! I like it!


  • Super-GOREgous
    January 30, 2008
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    awww....

    i can feel your pain on this peom...good job!


  • football-knight
    January 11, 2008

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    goood

    wow... this is dark... good but really dark... anyways I really liked the poem, although it is hard to read maybe change the text to red or something so that people can actually read it....