When i walk by you STARE, no,no even better you you GLARE, I look away... ASHAMED,SCARED,scared of what you thought of me!!!
These scars what do they mean to you?FREAK,ALONE,EMO? This is who i am you can..LAUGH,STARE,POINT,YELL ALL THE HELL YOU WANT!!!just remember....
everytime you point everytime you laugh..you leave a SCAR...you may not see it but its there not on my skin but on my....HEART
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Awe. Thats sad. I like it though. Very good!
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Emotional Knockout
Damn. I feel your pain so much here i use to be hated so much at my schools people would call me really hurtful names like sucidal faggot and shit and throw razors at my feet and tell me to go kill myself i was beat up alot and my family hates me i bearly got any family heh accept my two baby sisters and my baby brother. everyone else hates me practically and its so hard cause people laugh at you cause you act different im motherfukkin bi polar/mentally untsabled/schzoprinzic and motherfuckers laugh at me. But awsome write.
Sincerely,
Lonelywolf Tasagka
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I LOVE this! It's in a very unique form, which I admire, and I can relate to this somewhat. Great write!
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I FEEL UR PAIN!
OMFG, i know what U are going through. Try Sexually abused by my cousin, then whipped with a horse whip by my dad. I know your pain... i am always laughed at cuz i am Autistic. Dont be ashamed, just remember to take revenge...
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hey i liked it a lot and i completely agree. but it feels as if there is something missing, but i feel ur pain all the same i no wht tht feels like and it sux .:
rowns::. i feel ur pain.
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It was good though
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interesting
I just wanted to let you know that if you put stanzas in this poem then it would flow a little bit better.
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