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trick and creep

once a year comes a horrid day
when the witches and zombies come out to play
little children match their glory
and this is where i start my story

when all the children are tucked up n bed
the older teens wounder where to tread
pass the coast and driving fast
rain and thunder makes them gasp

passing a horrid house that is filled with doom
as they look around, scenery covered in gloom
dares and laughs get them close
she enters the house she jumps the most

walking around they hear the crackles deep
yet they don't know what might creep
dark and damp blood on the wall
hand-prints on the door
and moaning from behind it...

we cant go in
we cant leave them there
just a peak
no i don't care

she starts to head for the door
she hears her boyfriend scream
she runs back to them he's on the floor
every one is tied up and unresponsive

as she turns to run she spots something in the corner of her eye
overwhelmed and surprised she starts to cry, she is frozen with fear and stands out of the way of the door, it slams shut she hears the moans once more, she cries and walks out not making a sound, then all of her friends hit the ground, dead but twitching in the mud

she screams and runs to the car
but loan behold she cant get far
she sits in silence to clear her mind
as something creeps up from behind
the window smashes she gets out of the car
shes hit on the head and dragged back into the house.

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  • maralisa silver member
    January 31, 2008
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    a very creative write good luck with the contest


  • red roses
    January 9, 2008
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    great poem i love the imagery


  • Faithless Angel
    January 9, 2008
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    oooo me likey
    great!
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  • Xx Luna xX
    January 9, 2008

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    Thank you for entering

    This is so amazing. Very very very well penned. The ryhm is not forced and it is such a joy to read. Amazing job!
    I love the ending.
    Write on