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Innocence in Making Love

I thought there is no sacredness in making love.
It seemed very vulgar and ugly
until I made love with you
as you are innocent making love
with the innocent remains innocent.
It becomes vulgar when two persons
with ugly hearts make love.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    It becomes vulgar when two persons
    with ugly hearts make love.

    Indeed an innocent yet so true and universal defination..well done...


  • Olivias Violin
    January 9, 2008
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    "It becomes vulgar when two persons
    with ugly hearts make love." - Very Good