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Broken Dreaming

To dream is an adventure
The broken heart screams to be heard
Thoughts made known to the heart
To open the wound that flows so deeply

To dream is like living
There is a beginning and an end
It starts out rocky and everywhere
Smoothes out throughout the process
Then the end, unpredictable in sight

To dream is torture
The broken heart still screams as loud
To be heard is a turmoil that is hard to conquer.
The wound bleeds ever so slowly
Thoughts made known to the heart.

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    January 9, 2008
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    Great piece, I enjoyed reading this, although the lack of punctuation did irk me a bit.

    To be heard is a turmoil that is hard to conquer.
    The wound bleeds ever so slowly
    Thoughts made known to the heart.

    Those lines really stood out to me, well done.

    Keira
    MidnightRain