Laugh and the whole world
will fall asleep long enough for you to
steal a dream worth
....... dreaming
Author notes
Prompt:: Finish this the way you want
"Laugh and the whole world...............
A contest entry
- Finish this your way----- #2 by daviscth.
300 points, ended January 10, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A smile is truly worth a thousand words and more. I think it allows the world to turn and lets love live in our hearts. Nicely done.
Ted E
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Thank you for taking time out to post in my contest. Your entry is appreciated. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy
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nice concept
very positive message my friend, i wish you to realize all your dreams.
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Thank you as always...
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Very nice. I love the way you ended the sentence. maybe i need to laugh more!lol best of luck in the contest.
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yeah you and me both!!!!
thanks hun
-Love Layne
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You know you capture my heart with every write and hun this is no exception... but why steal a dream... make one of your own come true.. love to you sweetie...
Karen
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Thank you Karen, and as always, thank you for reading my work..
-Layne
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this is short to the point and boy does it make one powerful statement. Brilliant thinking now if only the world would laugh longer enough good luck in the contest.
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Thank you, much appreciated, I am glad you enjoyed this
-Layne
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Short and sweet. Nice
Good luck in the contest.
Keira
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Thank you for reading
-Layne
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Wow
I like these lines. Very original. Jane
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Thank you Jane
-Layne
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