She sits there everyday, workin.
Oh what I'd do to be with her, the one of my heart and dreams.
To be the one she chose, not some player or fool, but me.
My heart crys with the pain of not being able to be with her.
I know she's single, she isn't with anyone, but I'm not sure if she does, or could feel the same, and it hurts.
She'll ask me for help every now and again, and its agonizing to know that I could ask her.
She was recently hurt, I don't think she wants to take another risk, but only if she knew.
I waite and ponder on her, wandering if I could ever be hers, and hopefully, one day, I will.
To just sit there everyday, being with her as her friend, and no more, is wanderful, but not what I want, because I want to be more.
Hopefully, when she reads this, she might and mostlikely will understand, and accept how I feel about her.
And that is all that I ask for, until the day she can call me her's, and I can call her mine.
Author notes
If you wanna read anymore that I have, my name is: The Hidden One. If u cannot find me, look up,"My Eternal Flames" and u should be directed to one of my poems.
A contest entry
- Give me a [ 2 ] heartbeat catastrophe {watching you love her} by CatastrophicSmile.
500 points, ended January 31, 2008, 22 entries
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this was so touching to read and i'm sure emotional to write... to be able to put feelings down isn't always easy, esp. in a public forum. the feeling of wanting to be with someone and not being able to be at the moment stung as i read those words... good job.
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This is so emotional and real. I like how you expressed your feelings here. You never know until you ask so i say go for it! Best of luck in the contest.
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wow this is so amzing and emotional...i didnt know some guys could write so well it makes me quite sad that i can't find someone like you in my town
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I'm one of a kind, but there are many who are alike, and thats what you can hope to find. Thank-You.
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