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God's Eye

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As His eye shines upon the world
a new day starts in grace unfurled
clouds reflecting softest hues
across a sky of purest blues.

Horizon meets on mountain proud
where silence cloaks in tender shroud
a place where sea and sky doth meet
the centre of this earth's heartbeat.

Calming waves ripple to the tune
commanded by ebb and flow of moon
within His gaze a restful peace
as earth sends up sighs of release.

This perfect scene is not by chance
but God's creation at a glance,
in blessed gifts this earth abounds
just take some time to look around.





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  • Samplette gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    A beautiful write. Great rhyme and rhythm. Well done. Thank you so much for entering the contest.
    Sam

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 10, 2008

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    So beautifully penned hun, you have taken me into another world with such a masterpiece, this has gold written all over it I think.

    Karen


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    this is such an amazing write and is so beautifully written. i love the way it just flows easily. well done and best of luck gran