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Gloomy





In stones of my way
lost course, track of luck,
sea of illusions.
leave, don't look.





















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Prompt: Don't look my way!

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  • Judith Chandler
    January 10, 2008

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    Makes me think of Lot's wife in the Bible. Well, this is more full of illusions that she was, missing her home I suppose. This is very concise. "track of luck" is a good image.

    Congratulations.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 9, 2008

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    Very creative and immensely grasping! Speaks volumes... x Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.