Interlocked faux teats
cradle depravity
authenticated by lust's glow
carnal clusters spurned by morality
dilate vision ripped from convention
to extol crisscrossed climax as perfection
A contest entry
- Give it to Me by HeavenScent4U.
400 points, ended January 24, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Fiesta! - For my Favourites - by Never Fall in Love.
1250 points, ended March 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ouch - forget having a hard time to choose between different writes - I'll have a hard time choose between your writes!
Never ♥
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Wow. You never cease to amaze me. The forth and last line were just wonderful. You did this lady proud and I'm sure she would thank you for it
Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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WOW...
Your poetic vocab is Stunning.
That pic gave me the heebies jeebies.
You did a wonderful job with it.
Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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wow amazing take on the prompt however the picture did make me squeel and hide...you did no im squimish right? hehe best of luck
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Ewwwww.... OK.... great take on this.
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You know you like the pic. lol
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Excellent writing, my friend; don't think I could come up with something so creative from that graphic but you more than did it justice
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Great job on the prompt. Ouch that would have to hurt having piercings such as the picture shows.
Good Luck in the contest.
RedwingSpirit
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This is great self expression at its finest goodluck to you in the contest my friend best wishes and much love always
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WOW!! ive been saying that a lot lately, you have a way with words, all the best in your contest
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You have definitely done this picture justice - I'm afraid there is nothing that I can say here that will give your writing what it deserves
All I can say is BRAVO - well done!
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I think I'll disagree with Tarja, I don't think the picture's gross, I think it's gorgeous, but I'll agree with her that this is amazingly written (as it always is with your pieces). Thank you for sending me a link, I loved it Good luck, though I don't think you need it with something this good.
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It is beautiful indeed.
Thanks for reading.
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This is so weird that you sent this to me because I was just looking at pictures of this piercing and it's so gross!
I love the poem though, it's very well written and so you. Well done, babe. Good luck in the contest.
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lol thanks. I need more "gross pictures" to write about. So if you see any let me know. heh
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