Your beauty pierces me
like thread through a needle.
Look away!
I am stitched red!
Author notes
Prompt: "Don't look my way!"
A contest entry
- Prompt to inspire # 4 by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 9, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aww!
This was cute. Aww! The innocence of a crush...Well done. Jane
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Dear Jane
Thank you. "The innocence of a crush". I like that!
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Cute. That would be quite a good pickup line. Congratulations on winning silver for this short but clever write.
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A pick-up line?
While glowing like a light-bulb?
Thank you for your words.
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Very creative and attention grabbing... x Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Thanks a lot
LB, Love and lioght to you too.
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lol. Ouch.
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lol ouch!
Is it painful for you too? ))
Dear Kathleen, you are an old friend and a faithful one! Thank you.
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Lyndon, as always, your poetry is wonderful. You
have the ability to paint a picture with only a few
well chosen words. This is very touching! I also hope all is well with you and yours!! Happy New Year! -
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Dear, sweet Paulette
Thank you for your kind observation!
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Dear Poet
Thank you for your kind words.
Happy New Year to you and your loved ones.
Ron.
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So short and sweet! Every word and line well thought out and placed beautifully together. Congrats and best regards.
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Joe, your visits are perky
for both you and me!
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