You will see the love still
burning in my heart, eager,
love you do not want.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt to inspire # 4 by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Unrequited love so often is transparent. You've made me remember what that painful feeling was like.
Congrats on your HM.
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Very real and relative. You write from the heart where your readers all dwell. This is another write that speaks to us all... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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very wonderful...very understandable...excellent... best to you in the contest
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wow this is a really gripping and emotive write that uses little words to express it. well done and best of luck
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